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11+ Sutton Stage Two: Writing Triplets Guide

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Table of contents
  1. What are writing 'triplets'?
  2. How should your child use these triplets in the exam?
  3. Examples: Inform, Explain and Describe
  4. Examples: Analyse, Review and Comment
  5. Examples: Argue, Persuade and Advise
  6. Examples: Explore, Imagine and Entertain
  7. How to prepare your child for Sutton Stage Two writing tasks

What are writing 'triplets'?

In recent years, the writing task in the English exam for Nonsuch High School for Girls and Wallington High School for Girls has been based on the four National Curriculum writing ‘triplets’.

Primary school students may not have encountered these triplets as they are generally taught to slightly older children. However, there is no need to panic, as the skills that the triplets are based on should be familiar to your daughter.

Each of the four triplets refers to a different style of writing. The four triplets are:

  • Inform, explain and describe
  • Analyse, review and comment
  • Argue, persuade and advise
  • Explore, imagine and entertain

How should your child use these triplets in the exam?

The most useful way to think about writing triplets is as a marking tool for examiners. Markers will assess whether a child’s response addresses all three aspects of the relevant triplet(s), and use this to help them gauge how well-rounded a piece of writing is.

Therefore, while it will be helpful for your child to familiarise themselves with the writing triplets, they should not worry too much about rigidly structuring their answer according to one of these triplets.

It may be difficult or time-consuming for a child to work out which triplets are being tested, and systematically addressing each part of a triplet may not be a sensible way to approach the question. For instance, having a separate paragraph for each aspect of a triplet may not be a natural way to write an answer, especially when more than one triplet could be involved.

So what is the best approach?

The best way for your child to use these triplets depends on the format of the question and on your child’s strengths and weaknesses.

It is possible that the question itself will explicitly state which triplet candidates should base their answer on – for example, they may be asked to ‘argue, persuade, and advise’. In this case, children should carefully consider all three aspects and include them in their response. They might find it helpful to structure their response into three paragraphs.

However, if the question does not specify a particular triplet, the best approach depends on the individual student’s skills. For those who struggle with structuring their writing, particularly when it comes to non-fiction genres, learning and using the triplets could provide helpful guidance. On the other hand, students who are more confident in organising and coming up with their ideas may find it unnecessary and possibly counterproductive to focus on identifying triplets and addressing specific aspects of the triplets, as they may naturally incorporate these in their writing anyway.

It is important to remember that there is no one right way to write an answer using the triplets. Examiners will not be looking for a specific structure for each triplet, but for a well-rounded piece of writing that naturally incorporates the parts of the triplet throughout.

Crucially, each part of the triplet does not need to be addressed separately. For example, if they are writing a story based on an image, your child should be exploring their ideas about the backstory to the image, demonstrating their imagination, and entertaining their reader throughout, rather than dedicating one paragraph to explore, one to imagine, and one to entertain.

Below are some examples of questions based on each of the four triplets, along with an explanation of how the three parts of the triplet could be included in an excellent response.

Examples: Inform, Explain and Describe

If you could have any job in the world, what would it be and why?

For this question, students would need to inform or give information about the particular job or career they would like. They would need to describe the job in detail, discussing what the job is, how it works, and what it involves. In addition, they should explain why this job appeals to them.

Describe a time in your life when you disagreed with a friend. How did you fix or not fix the issue?

The ‘inform’ part of this answer would require students to give information about a specific disagreement. This would involve using lots of descriptive detail; they would need to discuss how this disagreement occurred, and their feelings and thoughts around the issue. Then, it would be necessary to explain how and why they were or were not able to fix the problem, thinking carefully about their reasons and justifications.

Write a letter to your local council discussing an upcoming community event, mentioning why this event is important and the activities that will take place. 

In this task, students need to inform the council about the upcoming event by providing key details and a description of what the event is and the specific activities that will take place. To engage the reader, they should use descriptive language to make these activities sound appealing and exciting. Additionally, they must explain why the event is important, providing a clear and convincing argument that supports their reasoning.

Examples: Analyse, Review and Comment

Write an article about a film you saw recently, discussing the things you liked and disliked about it.  

This question requires students to write a review in which they give their opinion on and analyse both the strengths and weaknesses of the film. They should break down the various aspects, such as the plot, characters, or special effects, and offer insightful comments on these. Ultimately, students need to provide a balanced analysis, considering where the film succeeded and where it fell short, supported by examples and reflective of their own opinions. 

Discuss the impact of technology on children, considering both the positive and negative effects. 

For this type of question, students are expected to provide a balanced analysis by discussing the benefits of technology, such as how it aids learning and entertainment, while also considering the negative impacts like addiction or lack of social interaction. Students should review both sides of the argument, offering detailed and insightful comments

How can homework be both beneficial and challenging?

This question invites students to analyse the ways in which homework can be both good and bad. They should offer carefully considered comments that refer to how homework can be both beneficial and challenging. They should review several factors – thinking about reinforcing learning and time management and how this compares to a lack of free time and stress. 

Examples: Argue, Persuade and Advise

Write a speech to persuade your school to introduce more outdoor learning activities. 

The main argument has already been presented in the wording of the question: a school should have more outdoor learning activities. The student needs to incorporate persuasive techniques to make their argument convincing (and consider how form affects technique – the way they aim to be persuasive in a speech, which involves verbal delivery, might not look exactly the same as written persuasive techniques that you would expect to find in a letter or article). Finally, they need to advise on how these outdoor learning activities could be introduced.

Write an article for your school newspaper encouraging students to take part in after-school activities/clubs. 

In their article, students would need to argue that after-school clubs are worthwhile and that more students should attend these clubs. To persuade their audience, they would need to think about how they would convince people their own age to join in and take part. Persuasive techniques will only be effective if they are targeted. Part of this argument could also involve advising students on the types of activities on offer and on which they should take up based on their own interests. 

Write a letter to a friend to ask them to join you on a charity run. 

This task requires students to persuade their friend by providing a convincing argument that the charity run will be fun and rewarding. They need to provide reasons why their friend should take part, using friendly and encouraging language. As well as advising their friend to join them on the run, for example to get in some beneficial physical activity, they could advise on how to prepare for the run, for example by giving training tips or advising what to bring on the day.

Examples: Explore, Imagine and Entertain

Imagine that you are a fairy living in a magical forest. Write a diary entry recounting an average day for you. 

In this task, students need to use their imagination to explore the magical world of a fairy. They should think about the kinds of activities a fairy might do and describe these in a way that is entertaining for the reader. Their writing should be vivid and creative, painting a clear picture of the fairy’s daily life in the forest.

Having read the extract, write a letter from the main character’s perspective. 

If students are given an extract, they may have to continue the text or write in a different style from a particular character’s perspective. They need to show that they have fully explored the extract they have been given and understand this particular character’s personality or motivations. Using this knowledge, they need to imagine how this character would write or react in new, unfamiliar situations. Their presentation of this character should be both entertaining and relevant. 

Look at the image that has been given to you. Write a story based on this picture. 

One of the questions your daughter may encounter could involve responding to an image. In this case, they need to explore the image fully. They should pay close attention to what they can see, and try to pick out small or unusual details. Then, they will need to use their imagination to try and elaborate on these details and use them to construct a plot. The goal should be to produce a storyline that is entertaining and engaging for their reader.

How to prepare your child for Sutton Stage Two writing tasks

Above are just a few examples that would require students to use each triplet. In the exam, there could also be questions that encompass multiple triplets at a time, and even in the questions above, you may see some crossover.

Familiarising themselves with all four triplets will equip students with the tools they need to write a well-rounded response to a variety of writing tasks.

To do just this, you may like to try our Sutton Stage Two practice tests. Every included writing task is based on the triplets, and our answer guide indicates which writing triplet(s) each question focuses on.

Our Creative Writing Pack will also prove highly beneficial in preparing for the writing task of the Sutton Stage Two Exam.

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